Jasmine Hart

Don't worry, it won't die. Ya, I like the plan for Briar and Willow. That sounds good. If anyone sees TNCowgirl, maybe run it by her. (And ask if she's ...

*poke poke* Briar It wasn't until then that I spotted Aidan. He was somehow on the outskirts of pain, on the outskirts of recent catastrophe. I hugged him wordlessly, tightly, ...

Thanks Kit. SUNDAY APRIL 6TH 2008 I think I'm going to ram my fingernails into the back of my hand. The flames are licking at my heart and it was ...

This is great,Kit. I'd put a question mark after "oven on", but apart from that I can't see anything I'd change. I especially love; "Such sickly sun-flower curtains. The house ...

April 4; This is really great. I love the theme and I especillay love the beginning and the end. Wish I could help more, but I can't find fault with ...

Woah Via. This is poweful stuff. The ending is haunting and very effective. My only quibble is that I'd omit the word "fable", but other than that this is absolutely ...

Have I read you before? I feel like I would remember you... Poem 1: I agree about cutting "to and fro". I'd put a full stop after "swing". I like; ...

Made my first post, Tis about dogs. Ideas? Um...not so much...

SATURDAY APRIL 5TH 2008 Ode To Seamus Heaney *I'm submitting this somewhere so I've taken it down but I'll put it back up once it gets rejected*

Here's the poem from Friday...wrote it late last night (though before midnight!) so didn't post then. It's only a measly haiku, as I was tired. Besides, there were too many ...

Tempest "Now, stop that! What's wrong with you?" Tempest grumbles as she made her way down the stairs in her ragged pink dressing gown. Calcite, the newest of the dogs, ...

April 2; This is really great, Cade. I can't fault it. April 1; I really enjoyed this one too, though for some reason I can't quite articulate, I liked it ...

This is really great, Clau. I especially love the first line, and "the doctors’ gloves are the same ones that suffocate your speech." Your use of language is brillaint, your ...

Poem 3; This is really great, Via. I love the story and you tell it brillliantly. I especially like; "She learned to walk in ballet slippers, they took her to ...

2 April; I really like the imagery in the first verse. Though you forgot the 't' in "last". I love "rose-white." I think that the second stanza is weaker in ...